Monday, 2 December 2024

Mastering doc reviews



Great doc reviews go beyond reviewing doc quality. It additionally assesses the author’s assessment of their writing ability. We can then right size nudges, within a safe space, to inspire the author to realise their full potential.
Mastering Doc Reviews shows how to lift doc quality across an organisation, using subtle tips and tricks to help everyone to write just a little bit better.

Saturday, 8 June 2024

Commenting guide for collaborative document reviews

Cartoon of a document reviewer.

After thousands of collaborative documentation reviews, from our Good Docs Project technical writers, we have established a bunch of practical tips for providing good feedback on documents. We’ve collated our collective wisdom into a commenting guide for collaborative document reviews. It includes:

  • Tips for reviewers to convey useful and actionable comments, which don’t mess up the original document.
  • Tips for authors, to attract useful feedback, and resolve comments cleanly and respectfully.

This guide will be useful for any teams working with doc tools which support track changes, like Google Docs, Word, LibreOffice and Pages. Many tips also apply to docs-as-code reviews in tools like GitHub and GitLab.

Thanks to the many Good Docs tech writers who helped collate and refine this guide.

Friday, 10 May 2024

Solar panels use 66% of the land required to generate and deliver coal power

 At 5c per kWh, we know that Australian solar generates the cheapest energy in the world, but how does it stack up against coal when comparing the land required to generate electricity?

At Rewiring Australia we have calculated that solar panels only need 66% of the land required to generate and deliver electricity from Victoria’s coal-fired power stations to our urban centres.

Land required to deliver coal in Victoria

Examining data from across the state, Victoria’s coal-fired power stations require:

  • 9,900 ha for open-cut coal mines, power stations and surrounds, for the cooling towers, ponds, and coal sheds. [1]
  • 7,700 ha for transmission lines to get the power to urban centres. [2]

By contrast, we only require 11,665 ha [3] of solar panels to generate the same 31,411 GWh/yr of power [4].

Admittedly, solar uses slightly more land if we just consider the power stations and mines (118%). But that number drops to 66% when we factor in the area the transmission lines required to deliver electricity to our urban centres.

Add solar to existing infrastructure

The beauty of solar is that we can incorporate it into our existing assets and mitigate our need to acquire more land. And for our many urban use cases we don’t need transmission lines to move electricity from source to consumer. Our roofs can keep on protecting us from the rain, AND power our buildings at the same time. Note that a solar array over a single parking spot of 3x6m in Australia produces enough electricity to drive the vehicle underneath more than 20,000km per year. [5]

“By installing solar panels on rooftops and car parks, we can reduce large-scale infrastructure builds and still generate more electricity than coal power stations,” says Rewiring Australia’s chief scientist Dr Saul Griffith. “The lowest cost energy system will maximise locally produced solar, whether that is on your rooftop or over the parking lot at the supermarket or the roof of the local warehouses.”

This work is part of a larger piece of research by Rewiring Australia exploring the different ways existing infrastructure can be utilised to generate solar power, which is much cheaper because it cuts out the transmission, distribution and retail costs of existing wholesale electricity.

Dr Griffith explains, “Repurposing existing energy infrastructure, such as open cut coal pits, transmission corridors, rail corridors, and gas transmission corridors will lower the number of new transmission lines and large scale renewable projects required to achieve our national energy transition to a nation run on zero emission electricity.”

And those other inconvenient truths about coal

When looking at maps of coal power stations, you notice the other reasons communities don’t like living next to them:


Footnotes

  1. Calculated from site maps for Loy Yang and Yallourn.
  2. Assume a quarter of Victoria’s transmission lines are dedicated to the quarter of Victoria’s energy generated by coal, and that there is 50m of cleared land under all power lines. Combines Geoscience Australia’s Electricity Transmission Lines Spatial Dataset,  with Australian Bureau of Statistics Mesh Block data to determine Rural vs Parkland vs Urban land.
  3. Assumes solar panels produce 200W/Sqm, solar capacity of 15%.
  4. Australian Energy Statistics 2023 Table O9.2.
  5. Assumes 20% efficient cells, 16% Capacity Factor, 90% charging efficiency, and 200Wh/km, and a 3 x 6m or 18m^2 parking space.
This article was published at Rewiring Australia Substack.